General Poetry posted June 10, 2013


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Thank Heaven

by alexgardiner


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The years lass hiv passed us by,
Tho' never wae a wushful sigh.
Each an' every year I cherish so,
wae an ever increasing lovefilled glow.

You arrr' withoot doubt a gentle lass,
giving tae all as the years gang pass,
Generous tae the nth degree,
as aw aboot you can surely see.

Twenty plus years av privileged such,
aye, such selflessness at yer every touch.
Hard tae explain in sae few poetic lines,
tae explain, I guess, at oany time.

Stull, I'll try wae ma clumsy heart,
Which jumps a beat whin we are apart.
Yea ken,whin yea see a butterfly alight,
Oan a fluer wae aw its colours bright.

That in aw 'ways you arrr' akin,
Aye, whin ah see that ma face is aw a'grin.
Try an' gie you sumthin' fur yersel' tae use,
S'like clim'n Everest withoot yer shoes.

Yea wurrie lass aboot aw folks aroon,
even whin you yersel' arrr' feelin' doon.
You've no bin keepin' weel these last twa years,
an' ma ain heart got fuwl o' fears.

Wait! A wee wee light is noo cummin' oan,
an' sum flesh noo startin' tae gei oan her bones.
Aye, aye, an' yer startin' tae read an aufie lote mair,
An' up frae 50 kilo's tae 60 noo, an' takin' care.

Yer Bonny face noo laughs at ma stupid jokes,
even whin it's at you they poke.
Ma bonny deary lass my hert is fit tae burst,
ah wis before thinkin', the hopeless wurst?

Up up an' away oan yer brammer smile,
aye, up an away fur many a lang lang while.
My hert wull simmer an' pray yer soul tae keep each night.
yea fuwl ma dreams lass wae the richest, glowin' light'

Oh ma lass ma Golden lass a see yea there like a bonny fluer,
a'll think o' yea ma Bonny lass ivery day, an' ivery single 'oor.
Yer shiney hair glowin' sae silkin' bricht,
ma hert Lass, yea gei a gigantic, heartfelt lift.

Noo sum twenty sum years hiv flashed by Lass,
an' yer stull that Bonny lass, an' a work o' sculptured class.
It took oanly wan second Lass to ken ma luv for you,
Since that day acroase that room , an' furiver Lass, ma luv wull stull accrue.

Thank heaven.
The Auld Yin.


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For a while My Lass was not to well but now the mend is on:)
Author Notes
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I use the Scottish vernacular in 90% of my poems.

The musical sounds and twists of the Scottish words used famously by 'Robert Burns', gives colour and with a little imagination and patience from the reader, makes for a experience in poetry which differs from the usual.
They say the English language is hard to master. Here all you need as I have mentioned is patience of mind and no preconceived ideas as to what is normal.

I have been told recently my humour is of the bathroom type and very much disliked. However, I won't let the misery of a few others get me down. I do say that humour to me is everyday life and I will never apologize for trying to make people laugh. It costs me nothing so let I be my gift to all who are a wee bit down :)

I was irrevocably betrothed to laughter, the sound of which has always seemed to me to be the most civilized music in the world.
Peter Ustinov (1921 - 2004)


I know that some still cannot get used to the idea of this vernacular. I do apologize, however if I do not use this dialect there would be no point in me writing at all. It is different I know but there is enough beautiful 'English' poems on FanStory that it should not matter. So, as it gives me great deal of pleasure I hope you do not mind me carrying on with this style. Thank you:) :) :): :)

A wee sample o' Scoatish vernacular.



Anither = another
Amber Fluid = Whisky
Amung = among
Beryl = Frustration
Breed = Bread , whin a man an' a wummin get together :(
Birlin' = Turning around and around. Jings ma heids fair birlin' efter those twa wee whiskies.
Bonny Lass = means, gentle, luvin' an' a carin' lass. so called beauty is only skin deep. (Tell that tae Miranda Kerr. Oh! My)
Banshees or Ghouls ,or miseries = Folks in FanStory that dinny like ma vernacular:)
Bile = boil, could be bile as in sickly sick
Biopsy = a stupid idea
Blidy Nora = Scottish exclamation!!!! Means Blidy Nora!!!
Bum crack = The part that fits into a bicycle seat.
Bum.. Erse as in joak.bottom.sittin' flaps.rear end....posterior
Bahookie = Bum as in erse
Breeth = Breath
Boobs = If yea dinny ken am no gonna tell yea:(
Brammer = Great, fanstastic, best ever
Claes = Clothes
Cawed = called
Ciao = Italian for ' Am gonna bugger oaf noo'.
Courin' = Cowering
Castration = is whin a bloke has tae sit doon tae pee screamin' in a high pitched voice :( ' oh Ma!!! Sum buggers pinched ma He-Haws' :(
Doaktur = Doctor
Een = Eyes
Emma Jane = nice name for a lovely daughter
Erection = jings iverybidy kens whit that means:( Is that a gun yea hiv in yer troosers or arrrr' yea jist happy tae see me:)
Echie = Eucalyptus tree
Foo = Full
Fur = for
Fekin = Non articulate rude adjective used mainly by big silly buggers
Flair = Floor
Furst = first
Fart =.Fart if quiet
Farrrrt. = Fart loud,you have to role your r r r,s farrrrrrrrt
Fart exceptional = FARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT
Fash.. Don't get excited. .dinny fash yersel lassy!
Fluers = Flowers
Guile = tae be a wee bit crafty. ( No a didnae find oany change in yer pockets hingin' up yer troos.)
Gillian = The ultimate Bonny Lass, my wife.
Gawin' = Going
Glaekit = adj. of lesser intelligence, slow on the uptake. Anyone not from Edinburgh
Gramer = Grammar......whit iver that means,, used by The Auld Yin sumtimes whin stoatin' drunk.. Shat yer mooth wummin' am as jober as a Sudge:
Gawp = to stare open-mouthed 'Whit are ye gawpin' at, hen? Never seen a willie afore?'
Hudders = Holders
Haggis = :) Food from the gods
Humungus = Enormous, larger than a Scottish summer.
Hert = Heart
Hen = woman. Arrrr' yea ben the hoose hen?
Hielan' = Highland
He-Haws = Wee dangly bits. Family jewels.
Hoat = Hot
Heapit = Heaped
Jings = Oh dear!! Oh Bugger! Aw naw!!
Koi = Japanese Carp
Knackered = bawless..(Hey Jimmy it wid freeze the baws oaf a brass monkey.)
Keekers = Eyes
Lude = loud
Lern....Learn
Lum .... chimney
Matoon = Urban centre in which mahoose is situated;
Moose = Mouse
Mahoose = My House
Mair = More
Mingin' = Smelly.Jings you feet are mingin'
Mullian = million, canny be that hard tae unnerston'
Muckle = very large, blidy big, no blidy wee.( Jings jimmys gote muckle He -Haws!)
Maist = Most
Nouse = To know
Oaf = off
Ofay = to know
Parkie = Park keeper or warden
Pe'als = Petals = pronounced peh-ahls.
Peep = wee look, Could be , 'whay dae yea think yer peepin' yer horn at ya stupid wally'
Pronoonced = Pronounced
Peekit = Off colour'.pinched face..yea look Peekit hen, are yea a wee bit tired?
Proapur Punkchewation = Proper Punctuation.
Pawky = Shy, introverted, sad face,or sly dry Scottish wit
Roamin' = Roaming = overseas connection for your mobile phone. Or ('Roamin' in the gloamin' wae a lassy by ma side'.
Reek = Smell = Edinburgh used to be called 'Auld Reekie'.
Lang may yer Lum Reek. _ Long may you live.
Stoory = Cloth eared folks wae nae imagination
Soat = Sought
Stoaped = stopped
Sic = such ( sic a tiny wee thingie) Even wee-er whin it's very cold.
Stie = Stay
Scoatish Summer' = Whin the sun cums oot..Furst an' second July.
Scoatish Indian Summer = Whin the sun cums oot mair than three times in a row.
Scoatish Lang summer =A fenominum'In yer dreams Jimmy.
Scunnered = Sick fed up, Scunnered landscape. Barren
Shite =Polite Scottish description, a compliment. Similar to cow dung
Stoor = Dust
Sair = sore
Sleekit = underhanded, sneaky 'Ah wouldnae trust yon sleekit wee bugger wi' the ship's cat'
Scaffie = labourer, sweeper upperer, dugs bidy.
Stope = Stop
Sojer = Soldier
Troos'. =.short shorts worn under the kilt, for the purpose of not scaring the public.
Tatties = Potatoes
Tripe = A taste gift from god. Jings Mary he's eatin' tripe again; 'Oh my god :(
Unnerstondin' = understanding
Watter = Water
Waater = Lots of Water
Waaaaaaater = Muckle ( humungus) lots of water
Willie = From a laddie's thingie. 'Hey, Jeannie! The wind lifted yon sojer's kilt an Ah seen his willie.
Weecalf =Small coo, or anither wurd fur a weeks holiday.
Wee shite = Used by joak as a Scottish endearment to The Auld Yin.
Twaweecalfs = A fortnights holiday.
Wisnae = not wearin' the troos. Muckle willie it wis tae. Must be frae Edinburgh!'
Wance = Once (Listen carefully I will tell you this only once)
Wheeshed = Be Quiet. ( Hud yer wheeshed or a wull lam yer bum)
Wurd = word
Wad = Would












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