Writing Fiction posted May 12, 2013

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Final Choice Real Estate

by sweetwoodjax

A House for Rent Contest Winner 

Kingdom Come Real Estate
777 Morning Glory Lane

Come exchange your hat for a halo in this beautiful gated community
Glorified lighting is available at no cost
No need for a night light because darkness cannot exist
The Last Supper Club offers dinner with the King
Beautiful gardens to behold. Accessible to all on streets of gold
Families are strongly encouraged
No visitors allowed--All who come here will stay for eternity
For the children, we offer Angel Nannies Babysitting Service
For the young and young at heart, we offer the Holy Roller Skate Park

Contact J. Christ to make your reservation
Rent has been paid in full

Bad Choices Real Estate
666 Wrong Road Way

A smoking hot deal awaits you at this prime location
Located right next to the Screaming Fits Spa and Salon
Free hot oil treatments provided day and night
You'll scream for our world famous skin peels
No water is provided, but we offer wine at the Whine Bar
Fallen Angels provide entertainment you can't find anywhere else
Bring your family and friends with you and we'll upgrade
you to a room with your very own furnace.
Sorry--no children allowed
Call Bee Elzebub to make your reservation now
The price--Your soul

Writing Prompt
Make two ads for an apartment for rent. Write one for Heaven and one for hell.

Describe your apartment and give an address. Be creative. Recommended: No mention of Heaven or hell in the ads. Maximum word count is 300 words.

A House for Rent
Contest Winner


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