General Poetry posted April 2, 2013


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Those were beautiful evening; Sat and glared thy setting; In

Those were beautiful evening

by Madhu Pattiath

Those were beautiful evening;
Sat and glared thy setting;
In thy beach of my blossom
Thakandhoo;
Lost forever a missed melancholy.

Stored in thy soil;
My real conscience;
A heartbroken man of fifty's;
Allah' ye know how it happens.

Waving minds of innocent culprits;
Have it for me at once, for me;
An innocent cruel;
Thy one and only.

Will it be back for me?
The rare gift of nature;
Worth for the world;
What did you think Not



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Those were beautiful evening;
Sat and glared thy setting;
In thy beach of my blossom
Thakandhoo;
Lost forever a missed melancholy.
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