General Poetry posted August 8, 2012


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this is a piece about how some people feel.

I know how it feel

by poemlady

I know how it feel
for someone poor to steal
I know what it's like
to go to bed hungry at night

I can imagine what a mother
goes through
when her childs says im
leaving you

for someone who can supply
my need and someone who
my soul they can feed

yes i know what it's like
i know how it feel
i know when love is real
I know, i know because
once that someone was me
and i had my turn to see
but now im grown standing on
my own
i realize with my own two eyes
i can make it
because i have the strenght
inside of me to take it.
BUT.... i still know what
its like to go
bed hungry at night
because that was once
my plight.



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


I certainly can sympathize with anyone who goes to bed hungry at night or who walks around stealing in the night. although it's very wrong to take whats not rightfully yours
and eventhough i've never stole a day in my life i walked in other people shoes to feel what they felt.
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