Romance Poetry posted May 17, 2012


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A couple is breaking up, this is their last hug

The Last Hug

by PLJones

Heart beats in my ear
Tears taste salty on my tongue
This is it, we're done



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


The heart beat that she hears in her ear is her ex's as she presses her head against his chest. She's crying and we don't know what his reaction is.
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