Spiritual Poetry posted March 21, 2012


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a simple poem depicting faith in the Lord

FoR I HAvE SiNnED

by jieyan

he needs you and me
we were dumb and walked away
yet he called again

we need him,he's there
we called to him, he answered
we did not care much

what have we done now
we need him, he don't need us
now come, kneel, and pray

let us welcome him
let him rule in our dark hearts
make it pure once more



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


originally, this poem consisted of 36 lines...

THANKS FOR THIS OPPORTUNITY...unfortunately, i don't have any MASTERCARDS AND VISA...WISHING TO upgrade......
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