General Poetry posted January 30, 2012


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My feelings on a random Friday

Friday

by Darren Lewis

I wake up in a apartment all alone! Begin the journey to work past traffic in a automobile with no passengers! To then arrive at an organization isolated in my own office! With deadlines to meet...

On the surface I'm confident well groomed, and smartly dressed with a robotic like cold exterior, but my fragile hart feels every single emotion I've ever experienced in this painful tormented insane world.

Its night I find myself in a packed club with loud music vibrating through my body with a pretty girl amorously kissing me. In the back of my mind I know I should be enjoying it. But it feels like I'm not really there. Everyone disappears again the club is silent!

I wonder who I am.... Where I am? Something's missing(I REMEMBER THE GOOD TIMES), I'm lost! I wish I could buy a spaceship and fly far far away from the darkness and into the light(serenity)

By Darren Lewis.



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