General Poetry posted January 25, 2012 |
Feelings in adversity ,thought of suicide
Shaken Soul
by Shweta gulia
At time when life speaks up
And nobody is around, in adversity when white turns to grey Sunshine is needed to be found But you are bounded by the rules , the society of hypocrisy and reputation You are surrounded by loneliness Which becomes frustration You think of severe steps to be taken When quitting seems easy than even standing still Than due to volcanic time,the soul gets shaken. Nothing is perennial,its the nature's voice And to end all this a decision is taken. Quitting the world becomes the choice. Time,the most powerful,I wonder Which can transform heaven to hell or the same It can create or settle down any blunder. Why anger generates from pain? The feeling of loss and pain is difficult to explain. When power turns to weakness, nothingness is only to gain. When agony and sorrow keeps on accumulating, the thought of end is continuously penetrating. Everything is coming to end,it will blow. Existence of God is felt,it screams from the soul The flashback of the past is what he has to show. Only by the valiant this voice can be felt, and if heard began to melt. The faces of the closest comes alive. Divine power does its work,it sows hope Realizing,after death love is what he still has to strive. He threw away from him the cowards spot His adversity shows the path The pain is unaltered but the flames are now less hot. |
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry
This poem describes the excruciating pain when a person is suffering from the adversities of life.The thought of committing suicide seems to be the solution but after getting acquainted with the real facts of life and the memories of his loved ones makes him rise above all.He quits his wrong decision and showing the courage collects himself.
by- SHWETA GULIA
AGE - 16 YEARS
PLACE - delhi, INDIA
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and 2 member cents. by- SHWETA GULIA
AGE - 16 YEARS
PLACE - delhi, INDIA
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