General Poetry posted November 20, 2011


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Simple thoughts in poetic form

I and soul

by creti

Let me breath my air
If I could just catch my part of breeze,
I would let my soul breath.

Its a endless road to walk when its love,
No, love ain't gonna die
Life gets a wrap though.

Life is a test every next day and not
Everyday is a sunny day, but yet its a beauty,
dim or bright there is a sun everyday.

The soul is tired and want to rest
but the eyes are hungry to see another day,
No it ain't desire but greed to live;
Where as long as I can cry there is sea to relate and
As long as I can smile there is you to be blame.




5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


Just my desire to write
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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