Spiritual Poetry posted September 9, 2011 Chapters: 2 3 -4- 5 


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
(a sonnet)

A chapter in the book Experiences of Death

The Rose

by Bicpen



Arrayed in beauty she displays her grace;
Somewhat profound and quiet, full of might.
Her petals tell her story, stern her pace;
Her scarlet bloom delights in heart, much sleight.
Her twisted tail begins, it grows, her cloak;
Each thorn is sharp, a cruel bitter face.
Each thorn is sharp, a hurt, she grows, such hope;
Delighting through her summer joy, her place.
Her life is full, a hopen simple rose;
Reminds of Gods own Son, much love him broke.
Our sins and written law his Fathers blows,
His cup in fullness drink or thorns they choke.
Exalt the Father’s throne, beloved come;
Because submitting, never work undone.


 





Based on the thoughts of an old flame it describes a greater love.

The structure is built around that of the Italian and Spenserian sonnet with a rhyme scheme (a.b.a.b., c.a.c.a., d.c.d.c., e.e.)

Hopen: a Dutch variant on the English word hope or hopingly...hence, the Volta 9th. line.

Beloved: pronounced as 3 syllables "be/lov/ed"
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Bicpen All rights reserved.
Bicpen has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.