Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted August 24, 2011

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by melyuki

What qualities exist within a soul,
allowing others' inner thoughts to roll,
like free flowing feelings, in gentle breeze,
lulled by emotions of absolute ease?


Could be aura surrounding a being,
sensation beyond both hearing, seeing;
personified in particular ways,
establishing empathetic displays.


When initial engagement runs its course,
a listening ear shall follow the source,
guided swiftly, as time passes along,
sharing the words of a breath-taking song.


Is there time and place for what's meant to be?
energetic fields around you and me,
that shine like candles with welcoming glow-
whatever it may be, just let it flow.


Poem of the Month contest entry


thanks for sharing moments in my day.. many happy smiles from melxxxx
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