General Poetry posted June 12, 2011


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Blind Faith

by Laidy

History. War and Faith Contest Winner 
Blind Faith


I kneel here praying
but I know not what to say
Lucifer tells me things
things that my faith says I cannot obey.

Thousands and thousands of years ago
there became a war
Lucifer knew not of his place
So He shut him down below.

All of this is written
and written well through history
Bible pages in the hundreds
this leaves my faith no mystery.

So, I kneel here and I pray
that the world finds true blessings of gold
I am kneeling on my wounds of sin
so that this blind faith I can win!

Writing Challenge
The challenge is to write a free verse poem on the topic: History. War and Faith. Free verse is a form of poetry that does not necessarily follow to any specific meter patterns, rhyme, or any other pattern. Free verse, despite its freedom, often still has some elements of form. Most free verse does observe a convention of lines and structure.

History. War and Faith
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