| Romance Poetry posted November 17, 2010 | Chapters: |
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Free Verse Love Poem
A chapter in the book Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
My Better Place
by Mustang Patty
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In my search for a Better Place,
I found you. If I lose you, I have lost my lovely space. The purity of this dwelling, that you have made for me, Has set my heart, my soul, and my spirit, free. |
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(edited on Nov 19th, from suggestions in feedback. Many folks asked me to remove the multiple repeats in such a short poem, and so this is the new version.)
This love poem is dedicated my hubby of almost 27 years - it WILL be 27 years in a month. We have been through SO much together, and managed to come out on the "other side." THANK YOU, Lorac1 for the beautiful photo.
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and 2 member cents. This love poem is dedicated my hubby of almost 27 years - it WILL be 27 years in a month. We have been through SO much together, and managed to come out on the "other side." THANK YOU, Lorac1 for the beautiful photo.
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