Spiritual Poetry posted May 2, 2010


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a tanka

Day and Night

by AlvinTEthington


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He separates the
Dome of Heaven from the Seas;
He is the LORD God.
His greater light rules the day;
His lesser light rules the night.




Tanka Poetry contest entry

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In a five line tanka, the middle line should serve as a pivot. It should form a haiku-like poem with the two lines before and another poem with the two lines after it. It should be 31 syllables or less.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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