General Poetry posted February 16, 2010


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agua viva de Vida

Rio y Vida

by voceronica

Ese río que atraviesa la pradera

ha sido vida ha sido luz

fuente y guía en tiempo antaño

idea pagana antes del único dios

refugio de lágrimas, lavado de pecados…

 

corriente cristalina albergue de amor

a golpe de agua enseña

sobre piedras el camino señala

abre al destino horizontes, mañana…

 

si  piedras suenan

el río canta:

vida,  muerte,  esperanza…             



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