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Glorious colours in the sky

A chapter in the book Poems for children of all ages

High up on the Hill

by fionageorge


Perched here high upon the hill
Darkness descends, surroundings still
Shades of sunset shimmering gold
As breathless glories of night unfold
 
I sit outside in my swinging chair
Look across the city, breathe in fresh air
I stare in wonder, can’t feel the cold
Watching nature's miracle unfold
 
The sun has gently slipped down low
Behind the mountains capped with snow
A dull grey sky of not long ago
Turns on a bright and spectacular show
 
Its beauty awesome to behold
As around me all turns orange and gold
For a few minutes, my life stands still
Perched here high upon the hill
 
 



First and last sentence the same writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 16-line rhyming poem about nature, where the first and last lines are the same.
The 16 linest can be one stanza, or 4 stanzas of 4 sentences, or 8 stanzas of 2 sentences.


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One of the many beautiful views from my varandah and lounge-room. I took this photo a few months ago.
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