Western Poetry posted January 5, 2009


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A response to Loyd Taylor's limerick

Response to School Boy Willie

by Rdfrdmom2


Having a little fun
Loyd Taylor's Limerick

Now Willie was a very bright lad,
But uneducated, which was sad;
12 years of school he made,
But kept failing fifth grade,
Choosing not to enter sixth with dad.

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My Response

I suppose one could say Willie was smart
Not to pass his dad on the chart
For it would not be cool
To make dad look a fool
If from home, he didn't want to depart.

jbh
1-5-09


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When I read Loyd's clever limerick, this just sprang into my head. It's not smart to make your parents look stupid, especially back in the western days. Hope you enjoy.
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