General Poetry posted December 6, 2008 Chapters:  ...134 135 -136- 137... 


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Letting love back in...

A chapter in the book CSP: A Collection of Poems

An Opening

by Sixteezkid


Now caving, craving, my heart pounds
You're my exception to the rule
That long ago, I made with bounds
And warnings both of sight and sounds
To build defenses - safer grounds
Not being one to play the fool...
Now caving, craving, my heart pounds
You're my exception to the rule






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Broke the rules of a "triolet" that I wanted to write - because I didn't want to change a particular line I wrote. So, a triolet, it is not.
-in iambic tetrameter-
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