General Poetry posted November 2, 2008 Chapters: 2 3 -4- 5... 


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Seeing unexpected death's toll.

A chapter in the book Going In Through The Out-The Doors

A Shared Experience- Uncommonly

by Mike K2

Two different four year old boys,
privy to seeing the same fate.
Different time, different place;
seeing death occur, without grace.

With one...
Bloody Indian's spirits shriek upon the land.
With the other...
Grandfather is caught in father's hands. 

With one family, they respectfully pass on by;
a mother closes the door, hoping death will hide.
Both boys, from other children, they stand apart;
uncanny perceptions and thoughts begin to start.

One boy learns fear from spiritual fright;
the second is comforted by angelic light.
Both initiations involve other's bleeding,
unceremoniously...
Whether spilled, or a heart breaching.

They died too fast...
The Wagon Man will eventually be around.

One for the bodies...
The other...
For the wandering spirits to be found.

Forgotten are those two boys who shared;
that life changes quick and isn't spared.
Living forever with a soul that is daunted,
seeing with eyes, now forever haunted.

Death can never be passed off as a dream,
as it becomes the head waters of life's stream.
Why you died then, we will never know;
but from our minds, we wonder...
"When will you go?"




This poem comes from listening and reading about Jim Morrison, the singer of The Doors. The actual stories are detailed in the next chapter. With me, this is my first solid and detailed memory. The one's before it are quite dream like glimpses and images. Such is the impact of something so profound. Right off the bat, life is recognized, but so is death and in a sense it sets one apart, until people themselves catch up and also have to build upon the experience, a perspective.

The photograph of my grandfather and myself was taken by my Grandmother at Cape Hatteras, NC. This was approximately a year before I saw him pass on. For the most part, my grandfather worked a split shift of Baltimore Gas and Electric and was a trouble man for substations. I rarely saw him and very often, he went straight to bed as he never knew when he would be called.

Parents can try to protect, blunt deaths impact or explain. But the image will stay...
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