Self Improvement Poetry posted March 3, 2024


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An entry for the club challenge

Does Anybody Care?

by kahpot

 
 
here in our little corner of the world

we sleep on empty stomachs ~

nothing ever changes
 
 



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- 3 lines.
- 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
- No rhymes.

Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it's uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
A poem for the homeless and the hungry
Thank you, Shelly Kaye for leading this club
Thank you, MoonWillow for the artwork

Club entry for the "the kimo poem" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

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