General Poetry posted March 28, 2022


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Yes, it's happened to me...

Ex Entanglement

by DeboraDyess



Frozen in the rain,
sad, excruciating pain.
                                                               I saw you again...


 



5-7-5 Poem contest entry


Okay, okay... So I wasn't in the rain, I was in WalMart. But nothing that works for this rhymes with WalMart! lol. Plus, it doesn't see the scene. So I fudged just a bit... But it WAS raining outside the store... Does that count? HA!
The formatting is intentional, meant to symbolize leaving.
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