General Poetry posted April 27, 2021


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4/6/4 Contemporary Haiku

Firmament Flows

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Firmament = Sky


firmament flows 

over midnight blue lake —

knee-deep in stars


 



Recognized

#58
April
2021


Contemporary Haiku: one to four lines, 17 syllables or LESS. No rhymes. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. These poems utilize a caesura (pause) The essence of haiku is cutting (KIRU) represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a (KIREJI) dash or ellipsis (~ .... ) Images are taken from human nature or nature.

Here is an example:

in the woodpile
the broken ax handle

the haiku foundation.org
source: Modern Haiku.org

Artwork by Seung-Hwan Chung

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
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