General Poetry posted April 27, 2021 |
4/6/4 Contemporary Haiku
Firmament Flows
by Gypsy Blue Rose
Firmament = Sky
over midnight blue lake — knee-deep in stars |
Recognized |
Contemporary Haiku: one to four lines, 17 syllables or LESS. No rhymes. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. These poems utilize a caesura (pause) The essence of haiku is cutting (KIRU) represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a (KIREJI) dash or ellipsis (~ .... ) Images are taken from human nature or nature.
Here is an example:
in the woodpile
the broken ax handle
the haiku foundation.org
source: Modern Haiku.org
Artwork by Seung-Hwan Chung
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in the woodpile
the broken ax handle
the haiku foundation.org
source: Modern Haiku.org
Artwork by Seung-Hwan Chung
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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