General Fiction posted July 5, 2020


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75 word Flash Fiction

Twisted Oliver

by kiwisteveh






















You know that feeling.

Actually, I rather hope you don't, for the feeling I mean is a dreadful mingling of the sensation a splintered stick makes when violently twisted in your gut, and the paralytic dread of what will certainly happen if you should try to grasp the stick and wrench it out.

For three hungry months fear held out

And then, just once, starvation gained the upper hand.

"Please, Sir, I want some more."



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