General Poetry posted February 14, 2015


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Rictameter

Carousel

by kiwisteveh



Come on
the carousel.
What adventures await
as we ride the gold chariot
of our dreams around life's gaudy fairground.
I promise music and laughter
will always surround you.
Just take my hand -
come on!
 

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A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, with the last line's word/s identical to the first. Rhyming is not needed.
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