General Poetry posted November 15, 2013


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Love Poem Poetry Contest

At last

by kiwisteveh

When we first loved, my love, the flames
Raged hot with passion's torch.
"Oi!" yelled my dad. "You quit them games!
You'll wreck the flamin' porch."

When we were wed, my love, the blaze
Continued burning bright,
'Til neighbours cried, "Oi, end your ways!
You're at it half the night!"

When we were blessed, my love, with kids,
Fruit of our hot desire,
They'd interrupt our lust-fueled bids
And douse the burning fire.

Now we are old, my love, and gray,
Inferno's cooled to embers.
We both have time to love all day;
Alas, no one remembers.



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