Biographical Poetry posted August 22, 2013


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Ah, memories....

Utakura

by kiwisteveh

I Remember Contest Winner 
I remember Utakura; guess it's running in my blood,
How our sleepy little river could become a raging flood;
How the schoolbus rattled crazily down Utakura Hill
Then sped across the water-course to give us kids a thrill.

I remember how the cowshed glowed, an island in the dark,
And the motor thrummed a welcome, in the chill, a warming spark;
How the jerseys lumbered, steaming, from the yard into the bail
Where they chewed through milking, placid, leaning huge against the rail.

I remember frosty mornings, waiting barefoot for the bus,
How we'd shove and shout and scamper; how we'd tease and fight and fuss;
And sunny summer afternoons, the sparkling water cool,
As we splashed and dived and floundered in our rocky river pool.

I remember riding bareback, chasing cattle through the trees;
At a crazy gallop, racing, with my hair swept in the breeze;
Golden paddocks full of hay-bales and a smiling, sweat-stained team
As the barn was packed to bursting and the well-earned beer a dream.

I remember chasing shadows as my path led far away;
Different places, different passions, different work and different play.
Now my sleepy river memories swell once again to foam
For the Utakura valley is calling me back home.


Writing Prompt
Begin your non-fiction autobiographical story or poem with the words 'I remember...' Complete the sentence conveying a moment, an object, a feeling, etc. This does not have to be a profound memory, but should allow readers insight into your feelings, observations and/or thoughts. Use at least 100, but not more than 1,000 words. The count should be stated in your author notes.


I Remember
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Utakura - pronunciation oo-ta-koo-ra

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