General Poetry posted October 19, 2011


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Sedoka contest; my first attempt

Men and Their Machines

by justjo66

Men and their machines
Saturday morning exchange
World affairs being managed

Sun rising up high
Mowing still needs to be done
World affairs will have to wait



Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.

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