Humor Poetry posted January 12, 2011


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a whimsical Whitney - see author's notes

Sluggish Snail, Why Tarrying?

by adewpearl


"Sluggish snail,
why tarrying?"
"You'd be too,
house-carrying. --
Your questions
make me weary.
Think twice before you query."




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Thanks to Cammy Cards, whose beautiful painting I've used before - I just keep coming back to this stunning work.
The Whitney poem is a seven line poem with syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7. Rhyming is optional.
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