Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 5, 2010 Chapters:  ...21 22 -23- 24... 


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a modified rispetto

A chapter in the book rispettos

The Secrets of the World

by adewpearl


The secrets of the world are found
in mighty oak and minute seed,
in springs that bubble from the ground
to oceans where their waters lead.

The beauty of Creation lies
in ladybugs and spacious skies.
Look up to see it in Orion,
or stoop to pick one dandelion.




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The rispetto is an eight line poem of Italian origin, written in iambic tetrameter. The first quatrain has a rhyme scheme of abab and the second switches the rhyming pattern to couplets of ccdd. In my poem, the final two lines are 9 syllables each but do not break the meter.
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