Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 29, 2010 | Chapters: | ...4 5 -6- 7... |
a contemplative minute poem
A chapter in the book The Minute Poem
My Mother's Kiss
by adewpearl
My mother's kiss healed any hurt, made sobs revert to sunny smile through any trial. In her embrace, my tears were dried, cares cast aside. Please tell me where to take my care when now my pain feels just as real and needs to heal, but she has gone, her kiss withdrawn. |
Mother's Day contest entry
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The minute poem is a 60 syllable poem written in three verses with syllable count of 8/4/4/4 in iambic meter. The rhyme scheme is aabb ccdd eeff.
I am using the one syllable, second preferred pronunciation of trial, as listed in the freeonlinedictionary.com.
My memories of my mother, who died when I was in second grade, fifty one years ago, are sketchy at best, but I do remember well the feeling I had around her of being safe and protected.
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and 2 member cents. I am using the one syllable, second preferred pronunciation of trial, as listed in the freeonlinedictionary.com.
My memories of my mother, who died when I was in second grade, fifty one years ago, are sketchy at best, but I do remember well the feeling I had around her of being safe and protected.
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