Romance Poetry posted April 28, 2010


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four rhyming lines

First Base

by adewpearl


He kissed me once
I bussed him twice
He smooched me thrice --
Sweet paradise!!




Short Love Poem contest entry

Recognized


I've reviewed dozens of entries in this contest and figured on the last night before the deadline I'd have a little lighthearted go at it :-) Heaven only knows what first base means nowadays, but back in ancient times when I was young, getting to first base involved kissing. LOL
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