Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 23, 2010 Chapters:  ...22 23 -24- 25... 


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a rispetto

A chapter in the book rispettos

Daisies Bright

by adewpearl


The golden sun so far away
sheds light that spreads ten thousand miles,
and light that bright can't help but spray
the planet with a billion smiles.

A patch of posies can't compete
with grandeur of this gold orb's feat,
yet when I find a daisied field,
a smile is what these flowers yield.




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A rispetto is an 8 line poem of Italian origin. The first quatrain has a rhyme scheme of abab, while the second verse changes up the rhyme scheme to couplets of ccdd.
No actual scientific research was conducted to come up with the math in this poem :-)
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