Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 8, 2010 Chapters:  ...41 42 -43- 44... 


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contemplative triolet

A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified

When God Gives Answers I Reject

by adewpearl


When God gives answers I reject,
I have to question what I've asked.
What selfish wants must I suspect
when God gives answers I reject?
What winning hand did I expect,
what numbers when the dice were cast?
When God gives answers I reject
I have to question what I've asked.




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The triolet is a repeating form poem that originated in France in the Middle Ages. With eight lines in iambic meter, the rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB. All three lines ending in A are the same and both lines ending in B are identical.
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