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modified triolet dedicated to my friend James
A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Point of View
by adewpearl
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My lungs breathe in the salty air as squawking gulls fly overhead, and in this moment I'm aware as lungs breathe in the salty air, I am for them but one to share a morsel of my crusty bread. My lungs breathe in the salty air as squawking gulls fly overhead. |
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The triolet is a French repeating form composed of 8 lines written in iambic meter. The rhyming pattern is ABaAabAB. The capitalized letters denote which lines are repeated, so line 1 is also lines 4 and 7 and line 2 is repeated as line 8. I have changed the first word in line 4, which is why I call this a modified triolet.
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