Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 1, 2010


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a shadorma

Forbidden Fruit

by adewpearl


Forbidden
fruit has but one bite
that matters,
for once those
lips close on first bite taken,
all is forsaken.




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The shadorma is a six line poem of Spanish origin with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no set rhyme scheme.
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