General Poetry posted February 20, 2010


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whimsical shadorma

Lickety-split

by adewpearl


dragonfly
darts lickety-split --
one quick flit
zips him by
those lazy, laid-back flutters
of the butterfly.




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The shadorma is a six line poem of Spanish origin with syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no set rhyme scheme.
The maximum speed of the dragonfly is 38 miles per hour.
The maximum speed of the butterfly is 12 miles per hour.
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