Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 7, 2010


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The Second Time Around

by adewpearl


The first time took my breath away;
He stole my love with boyish charm.
Earth turned to Heaven on that day

Soon as I held him in my arms.
Elation I had never known
Charged through my heart, surged through my soul,
Outweighing any pain I'd owned,
Now certain that my life was whole.
Doubts filled my mind if I could feel

This way a second time around,
If anyone could ever steal
My heart so surely, so profound.
Emotions got the best of me

And then I heard your maiden cry
Robustly calling, "Look at me;
Our love's begun for here am I."
Until you came I did not know
No limit's set; a heart will grow.
Delightful daughter, love of mine, my second child, my Valentine.





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