Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 17, 2010


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I Once Believed

by adewpearl


I once believed in fairytales
and hope that flew on wings unseen.
So sure was I that love prevails,
but that was then when I was green.

Experience has taught me well
that more than hope on wings can fly,
and so I've come to bid farewell
to love that paused but passed me by.




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I'm using this definition of green: naive, gullible, callow, inexperienced
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