Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 8, 2010 Chapters:  ...6 7 -8- 9... 


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a reflective ottava rima

A chapter in the book The Ottava Rima

Unexpected Beauty

by adewpearl


Bare trees that line a riverbank look stark
until reflected in the limpid stream,
for in its course what seemed severe and dark
is softened to become a rippled dream.
When what was stripped of life picks up the spark
of sun that strikes a chord with every beam,
there is no death or chill in ice and snow,
but only beauty in the water's flow.




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The ottava rima is a centuries old Italian form that consists of 8 line verses written in iambic pentameter. The rhyme scheme is abababcc. There can be any number of verses though this poem has only one.
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