| Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 15, 2009 | Chapters: |
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A Winter Triolet
A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Unplanned Beauty
by adewpearl
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As crystal flakes float to the ground
they make my world a fairyland of feath'ry fields and muted sound as crystal flakes float to the ground I feel a magic few have found and fewer still could ever plan as crystal flakes float to the ground to make my world a fairyland. |
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I've eliminated punctuation for ease of flow
The triolet is a centuries old French repeating form of only 8 lines. Line 1 is repeated as lines 4 and 7, and line 2 is repeated as line 8. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB, and the meter is iambic.
I have taken the liberty of altering one word in the final line to improve both flow and sense.
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and 2 member cents. The triolet is a centuries old French repeating form of only 8 lines. Line 1 is repeated as lines 4 and 7, and line 2 is repeated as line 8. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB, and the meter is iambic.
I have taken the liberty of altering one word in the final line to improve both flow and sense.
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