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A chapter in the book Rejoice: Christmas Poetry

The Legend of the Owl

by adewpearl

Whoo Whoo the owl cries as he flies,
whoo whoo, whoo whoo --
I don't believe the raven's lies,
whoo whoo, whoo whoo.
He says they're off to see the Son
of God who made us, everyone,
but I need proof that this is true,
whoo whoo, whoo whoo.

I hear the robin's faithful cries,
it's true, it's true,
but I won't join those on the rise,
adieu, adieu.
The others flew to see the King,
to bring him gifts and praises sing,
but I've been doomed to ask anew,
"whoo whoo, whoo whoo?"




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This Christmas legend tells of how the raven gathered up all the birds to fly to worship the newborn Jesus. Most of the birds joined him on this pilgrimage and paid their King homage. The robin distinguished himself with his selfless gift of fanning the flames to keep the baby warm and to this day bears a beautiful red breast as his reward, but the skeptical owl, who refused to even make the trip, is doomed to this day to ask his constant question, Whoo Whoo?

The octogram, invented by Fan Story's Sally Yocom, is a two verse poem. The syllable count is 8/4/8/4/8/8/8/4 in each verse. The rhyme scheme is ABABCCBB ABABDDBB. The second line of verse one serves as a refrain at the end of both verses. When reading this aloud, I suggest drawing out the words in the four syllable lines.
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