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a reflective rondeau

A chapter in the book Rejoice: Christmas Poetry

Who Shined the Star?

by adewpearl

Question Poetry Contest Winner 
Who shined the star whose luster showed
the way to travel down that road
which led great men to see the King,
a babe who made the angels sing?
Whose labors lit his small abode?

When light throughout the night skies flowed
as ne'er before those heavens glowed,
whose efforts lit each angel's wing?
Who shined the star?

To whom, I ask, is my debt owed
for blessings which his work bestowed?
My gratitude to him I bring
whose steadfast toil revealed the King
with light as light has never glowed.
Who shined the star?



Writing Prompt
Question poetry is used to question anyone or anything. It can be rhyming or free verse.


Question Poetry
Contest Winner

Recognized


The rondeau is a 15 line poem in 3 verses with a rhyme scheme of AABBA/ AAB refrain/ AABBA refrain. The refrain is taken from the first words of the first line.

As the daughter of a construction worker, I guess it's natural that I wonder whenever I see a beautiful display, whose humble labors and hard work contributed to it. :-)
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