Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted August 20, 2009 | Chapters: | ...9 10 -11- 12... |
a reflective rondeau
A chapter in the book rondels and rondeaus
Entreat Me Not
by adewpearl
Entreat me not, this I implore, that I should offer up to war the sacrifice of my sweet child upon whom God and life have smiled. Please hear this plea from my lips pour. You can't demand forevermore that mothers' children settle scores with those your hardened hearts revile. Entreat me not. For eons youth have joined that corps who march into the battle's roar as bodies on war's altar pile, till now you ask I add my child. It's time to say, No nevermore. Entreat me not. |
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The fifteen line rondeau consists of three verses.
Verse one has five eight syllable lines in the rhyming pattern of AABBA.
Verse two has three eight syllable lines followed by one four syllable line, the refrain, that is derived from the first words of the first line of verse one. The rhyme scheme of verse two is AABC.
Verse three has five eight syllable lines followed by the four syllable refrain. Its rhyme scheme is AABBAC.
Verse three has five lines of e
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and 2 member cents. Verse one has five eight syllable lines in the rhyming pattern of AABBA.
Verse two has three eight syllable lines followed by one four syllable line, the refrain, that is derived from the first words of the first line of verse one. The rhyme scheme of verse two is AABC.
Verse three has five eight syllable lines followed by the four syllable refrain. Its rhyme scheme is AABBAC.
Verse three has five lines of e
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