Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted July 19, 2009


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reflective cinquain

When Children Still Believe

by adewpearl



When once
upon a star
I wished for love to call,
no one had told me yet that stars
can fall.





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A cinquain is a five line poem written in 2/4/6/8/2 syllables.
Characteristically, there is a downward turn in either the fourth or the final line.
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