Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted July 13, 2009


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Whispered Waterfall

by adewpearl



Must
every
glistening
waterfall rage,
a driving Niagara, crashing the ground,
or have we room in our world for cascades
that whisper mild,
gently-made
drizzled
sound?






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Niagara is pronounced here in 3 syllables, which I checked against two syllable counters to make sure I wasn't the only one who spoke it this way.
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