Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted July 11, 2009 Chapters:  ...4 5 -6- 7... 


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a wildly modified triolet

A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified

A Drop of Sun

by adewpearl


A drop of sun is all that's left
now dusk has come to steal the day,
but there's no cause to be bereft
if drop of sun is all that's left
for we can thwart dark nightfall's theft
with trust we'll soon see light's new play.
One drop of faith, if that is left
is all we need at end of day.





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I found VMarguarite's delightful picture about a week ago and have been thinking and thinking ever since of a poem to complement it. Finally, I composed something. I'd like to take this opportunity to say once again, the artists at FanArt rule!!!! :-)
As for the form of this poem, I've taken so many liberties with the triolet here that I make no claims whatsoever to that's being its form - it's some kind of second cousin. LOL
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