| Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted July 8, 2009 | Chapters: |
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a modified triolet or NOT triolet-see author notes
A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Shifting Tides
by adewpearl
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If I feel puffed up by my pride
to think I've reason for conceit, I stand where sand meets shifting tide if I feel puffed up by my pride to watch a whole world tossed aside. With one brief glimpse of change so fleet, if I feel puffed up by my pride, I lose all reason for conceit. |
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In a triolet the second line is repeated as the eighth line. In my modified version, there is some change in wording in the final line, so I lay no claim to this poem's being a true triolet.
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