Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 2, 2009


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a reflective tanka

Birthing Place

by adewpearl



Bits of broken twigs,
purposeless upon the ground,
trash beneath my feet,
but the dove's discerning eye
sees in them a birthing place.






Tanka Poetry contest entry

Recognized


The tanka is a 5 line unrhymed poem with syllable count of 5/7/5/7/7.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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