Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 22, 2009 | Chapters: | ...22 23 -24- 25... |
a reflective cinquain - see author's notes
A chapter in the book cinquains
The Path to Enlightenment
by adewpearl
To ask but not yet know -- this, the journey taken -- never certain we are not mistaken. |
Recognized |
When Adelaide Crapsey first devised the cinquain, she wrote down no rules for the form. Over the years, others noticed that a majority of her fewer than thirty cinquains followed the pattern of 2/4/6/8/2 though several did not. From this observation somebody decided the 2/4/6/8/2 pattern should be a rule. (I suppose because people like things that are easily quantifiable) However, I believe, like Crapsey, that not all poetry works out each time to fit a rigidly set pattern. I have chosen to have my final lines in this poem read 7/3 instead of 8/2. It is a conscious choice, not an oversight in syllable counting. Below is just one of Crapsey's cinquains that break her own pattern - google her if you want to read all 28 of her cinquains to see others that break the pattern.
Fate Defied
As it
were tissue of silver
I'll wear, O fate, thy grey,
and go mistily radiant, clad
like the moon.
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As it
were tissue of silver
I'll wear, O fate, thy grey,
and go mistily radiant, clad
like the moon.
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