Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 20, 2009 |
contemplative quatrains
Daisies
by adewpearl
When I was walking in the woods, among the shades of green, a splash of color caught my eye, as bright I'd ever seen. Each flower's center glowed with gold, surrounded by pure white -- till I was almost blinded by this hypnotizing sight. I could have paused to pick a bunch to place in a bouquet, to carry home to fill a vase in dazzling display. Nobody would have faulted me, for daisies are not rare -- so many grew among the ferns, enough the woods could spare. But if I'd plucked them from their place of jaunty jubilee, to be confined in crystal vase, what benefit would be? My visitors would hardly note what beauty had been lost, but I who'd seen them first when free would surely know the cost. |
Recognized |
The last time I used the word "till" to mean until, I had several reviewers point out to me that I meant 'til. A couple even pointed out to me that "till" means to cultivate crops. The Oxford Dictionary, American Edition, lists the first definition of "till" as a prepostion that means the same things as "until" and notes that "Until" is more usually used if it is the first word of a sentence. I know this author's note is as boring as boring can be, but I thought I'd just avoid a possible point of contention before it happens :-D
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